Sky Parted As a Scroll

Hands of God Above Reminging us of His love Parted the clouds, light

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John Freeman

Date: 8/17/2009 8:52:00 PM

Beautiful sight, Sara, Sincerely Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/17/2009 2:58:00 PM

i wrote a poem long ago, you'll probably be the only person who will understand it. i know because of this title. it's called "My summer vacation". i'm sure you'll love it. john

James Fraser

Date: 8/17/2009 10:25:00 AM

Nice write Sara>>James

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/17/2009 10:19:00 AM

Sara~ Just Beautiful I love your spiritual side! Laura :)

Steve Malebranche

Date: 8/17/2009 3:02:00 AM

Beautiful write...God is always there to light our paths and show us His love by making a way out of any problematic situation we may be facing...Thank you for your comments on two of my pieces.