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10 Reasons Forests Are Magical | Earth Rangers: Where kids go to ...

Along the woods of glow and mist breezes paint an outline moon-kissed, on skyline Where fireflies jet their rare debut beneath gilded clouds’ marquee to skyrocket Amid collage of unkempt leaves; debris drops …old pine- timber heaves to skydive I amble ‘round this forest known -- chanting lush nature’s psalms alone like skylark Deep the hills…inner ghosts are gone while breaths quicken with soul-fire on my skyway Joseph May's Compounding the Verse Contest 5/17/2020

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Date: 5/24/2020 1:19:00 PM
An enchanting entry Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 5/23/2020 8:51:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette, Congrats on you win..
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Date: 5/23/2020 6:30:00 PM
Sky, mist, leaves, fireflies, rumbling leaves, the forest....everything about this creates a soothing atmosphere through your beautiful words. Congratulations on your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 2:54:00 PM
Keep up the great writes my friend, Blessings xo
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Date: 5/17/2020 2:11:00 PM
As a child, I was always taken on hunting trips because I could smell the prey before anyone could see it. A forest may be a feast for the eyes, but eyes closed, aromas tell their tales! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/17/2020 11:35:00 AM
Loved the imagery of your trek through the forest, Nette, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:50:00 AM
Love walks in the forest, there's something quite magical and enchanting about them. Tom
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