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Sky Has Darkened

The sun has just fallen and the moon arose The night sky has darkened and has become black From light of the candle I seemed to have dozed Darkness has taken over, taken me back My orange pumpkin’s glowing right next to me Taking me into dream’s sweet tranquility The night air is very cool, calm, and peaceful Jack-O-Lantern’s equal and quite powerful
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 8:14:00 AM
i really like the picture you paint with this awesome poem on night time.. i love the night sky and cool air. cory
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Date: 9/28/2012 6:25:00 AM
Interesting work..Your night sound much like my night was..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2012 10:26:00 PM
SUPERB RISPETTO RUSSELL LUV .. DARK EERIE ESSENCE SETS TONE SO WELL .. ASTOUNDING IMAGERY MY FRIEND .. LUV THE GLOWING PUMPKIN .. WOW WONDERFUL AS ALWAYS
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:45:00 PM
this is nice how you made it with you dreaming by your pumpkin!
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