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Sky Above Is Calling Me

At night,when you look up high you see a reminiscent boundless sky With infinite stars ,all elegantly conveying Twinkles, zeal your mystifying imagination It's *****,there is nothing but a dark sky with wonders Appealing us in life's monotony Wish to plod to this crystal lit up Distant bodies up there,Tempting this world Cause of Voyager and new Horizon Stars play and dance in my gazing This synchronization is pounding Zenith enhancing curious minds Upholding us with significant bind These Benevolent celestial with mystique mesmerizing me And that sky above is calling me... 8 JUNE 2016

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Date: 11/3/2017 5:33:00 PM
Twinkles, with or put zeal mystifying your imagination: Maybe sound better and more grammatically correct. Nice thoughts.
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thankyou.....~blessed~
Date: 6/9/2016 8:15:00 AM
The beautiful Sky is calling a beautiful person...like you...a beautiful verse Lekhika...you have been summoned lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:43:00 AM
thank you...I guess I really am summoned...~blessed~
Date: 6/9/2016 6:52:00 AM
- A lovely poem, with a great voice Lekhika :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:09:00 AM
tHANK YOU.not that great than smile...
Date: 6/9/2016 5:49:00 AM
Very lovely with good imagery. When I look at the sky it's dizzying for me. It's like looking at a vast ocean. Very compelling but something I know I am not a part of. A seven from me for this well written piece. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:03:00 AM
THANK YOU...~blessed~...you got it like ocean with deep mysteries..
Date: 6/8/2016 11:19:00 PM
LD, a beautifully penned poem, lovely 7~
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:28:00 PM
Thank you..BROKEN WINGS..~blessed~...

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