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Skin Tones

What is the color of your skin? Yellow as the radiance of the sun that yields to the ticking drips of morning's climb ; or black in the gentleness of a dusk closing its light to render god and man the sleep from trodden journeys? Perhaps, white like cavorting waterfalls tumbling into ripples of snowflakes, lips freezing into icicles of wintry moon? Is it brown likened to the very soil of a hearth feeding our bones with of mounds of wheat? Our complexion has nothing to do with the universal language of freedom or inalienable rights of oneness--the equal opportunity given by life's behest. And yet, most of humanity have a low tolerance for people whose skin is colored like evening-- marginalized through chains of prejudice. I weep and ask; i have no answer. For Brian Strand's Premiere 125 Contest Reposted 1/30/2018

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Date: 6/24/2014 7:47:00 AM
a relevant topic well worth us bringing out its incompatibility to human continued existence and progress.... we are more than our claim to skin hue...thks for sharing
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Date: 6/21/2014 7:36:00 PM
soupmail, nette
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Date: 6/21/2014 6:48:00 PM
Wow, outstanding, Nette. Did it take first place??? I think it should have!!!!
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Date: 6/19/2014 12:21:00 PM
Awesome!!!! A well written piece nett....and enjoyable comments as well....thank you...
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Date: 6/18/2014 2:04:00 PM
This is what the civilized world has not learnt to cope with, and I doubt if it will ever manage to. Racism rears its ugly head, even in fields where it was non-existent but now is so prominent (such as in sport). Congrats Nette on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/18/2014 2:17:00 AM
just popping back with my congratulations Nette! Hugs jan xxxx
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Date: 6/17/2014 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win in the contest on Tolerance, nette
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:01:00 PM
So. Much. Truth. I wish I knew the answers too. Perhaps the answers lie in how we treat each other genuinely. Maybe. But, what do I know?
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:17:00 PM
Most human are unwilling to suppress and sublimate the competitive drive to compete and subdue eachother, its a purely animal trait. Remember Nette, competition is opposition in human eyes. I think we need more Divine Inspiration. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:27:00 AM
This shows to a great deal how dynamic you are in your poetic flair. Its no easy topic to still be able to capture a readers attention but I thought you did a wonderful job. The message is succinct and strong, something that we can take note of.
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Date: 6/16/2014 6:36:00 PM
I particularly liked Tim's comments on this great poem. I might no have answers, I sure have some fun ideas, everyone should have to live in someone else s skin for a month, when you live and feel it, you gain empathy towards others who suffer it. Cheers
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Date: 6/16/2014 4:46:00 PM
this is a fantastic pen Nette until people learn tolerance it is a sad world gl in contest hugs
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Date: 6/16/2014 2:32:00 PM
And how! Skin colour is just the effect of climatic conditions.Your poem is exceptional and deep.; the closing line startled me! Had fun with your last challenge. Thank you!
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Date: 6/16/2014 2:22:00 PM
There is no answer..there is no cure..al we can do is treat everyone how we would like to be treated....fear, jealousy and hatred are all excuses. Egotism and elitism are all to prevalent...peace, love and happiness is the motto we should all live by...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/16/2014 2:16:00 PM
I hate any form of prejudice Nette and that based on the colour of someone's skin is oh so sad - its the person that counts not the colour of the skin you are in. Hugs Jan xxxxxx
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Date: 6/16/2014 1:57:00 PM
Truly no answer. Some people are stupid in their own right without knowing it - thinking they see but don't see. Others are indeed blind. Only God can open their eyes. We are the product of our upbringing. But one can change as He always thinks His is perfect. He will make sure that we mold to what He has envisioned for us. So let go. It's not our job :)
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