Ski Lessons

Slipping, sliding, Kicking, gliding - Iffy my technique. It's a snowy week. Never skied before - Got to do this more...! written 21st January for Julia's Skiing contest

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/25/2023 6:28:00 AM

Try, try again. Never give up! Congratulations on your win Jack! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/24/2023 9:49:00 PM

Jack, watch those hips of your, doesn't auger well for us oldie, if we fall..All the best Mate...Harry.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/23/2023 6:42:00 PM

Dear Jack, your acrostic poem is so delightful! I adore the action and admire the enthusiasm. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/22/2023 7:20:00 AM

Think i'd look like a cartoon character if I ever tried my hand at skiing! Having said i'v always wanted to try. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/22/2023 12:43:00 AM

Very beautiful with short, sweet words and rhymes.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2023 12:02:00 AM

Your first short lines are full of confident movement, Jack, and I suspect that you've been taking lessons behind our backs :) :) Always enjoy your style of writing, my friend ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2023 1:39:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2023 10:20:00 AM

oh your really pulled off a good one, my friend. Love this