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Sketches of Dew

The lake is a plate of evening blue Here where mists of dew sprinkle the view Under lilting skies the undulating sea Stretches far beyond infinity Silent and calm, no hint of green Smooth as silk with translucent sheen Rippling blue as far as fingers can see Yet when the moon’s luminosity Fondles the surface where the wavelets flow Twinkling jewels are dew-pearls’ glow To easels of moonbeams on a crystal sea How incredibly beautiful this vignette can be... © For Brian Strand's Image Theme Contest/ 2 to 14 Lines By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 9:52:00 AM
Oh no wonder us here on soup love you nette, with awesome poetry like this. love harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 5:46:00 PM
Are you kidding me? You're not a poet! You're a painter! Congratulations, my friend!
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Date: 1/3/2012 3:19:00 PM
Great image and #1 choice Light & Love, Congrad's Happy New Year
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Date: 1/1/2012 10:17:00 PM
Ah... what a fantastic image, very nicely done, Congratulations on your win, Greg.
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Date: 1/1/2012 6:03:00 PM
One couplet is a strand of pearls that connects to the next...this is awesome , Nette. I love it. All of the lines are my favorite...it's too hard to choose just one! Happy New Year, dear. Thanks for your poetry friendship..u r always missed whenever u are away! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/1/2012 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Beautiful poem and I love the rhyme and rhythm :) Love, J.
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Date: 12/31/2011 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) Best regards, Jon
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Date: 12/31/2011 6:50:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win...BG
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:51:00 PM
Nette. I love the rhyming in addition to your imagery. This is one of your best! (and congrats)
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Date: 12/31/2011 12:06:00 PM
Verbal pigments from the palette to the canvas in this vivid imagery. Good entry which deserved to win in the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:10:00 AM
Congrats Nette luv on a third place win with this delightful dynamic poetry ... always a treasure luv..
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:14:00 PM
Very pretty Nette. I think you are probably one of the few who chose dew but you did a fantastic job. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:27:00 PM
Hi Nette, this was just one of the prettiest poems, I really like this one. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:37:00 PM
Congratulation for your win on your nice write. bl
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!---Lori
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Date: 9/13/2011 2:45:00 PM
Nette Congratulations on your big win with this wonderful write.
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:34:00 AM
I can see why this beauty is at the top of the list!! Lovely work, Nette!!!
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:30:00 AM
Tadaaaaahhh! Back in the winning circle Congrad's Light & love
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:17:00 AM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON THIRD PLACE WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:18:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : ) And thanks - the contest was great fun
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Nette.
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Nette. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/13/2011 3:54:00 AM
hey Nette congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 10:49:00 AM
super scenery supercedes everything in this lovely piece Nette luv... effective visuals intoxicate the reader.. winning status my friend... good luck luv...
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