Skeltons

Skeletons Skeletons remain embarking in the closets,lurking in shadows. Detecting- ridiculing your despair,riding the hind quarters like a stallion. Black raven's peck at your soul,spreading news of tragedy. Legends of the old ,creeping through corridors. Whispering words of the untold truths. Looting every small bit of hope,Skeletons remain embarking in closets,lurking in shadows. Whispering untold truths and lies... Tears in the rain ,and hushed pain.. whilst that black raven pecks out your eye sight has you blindfolded; to the skeletons remaining. written by: Brenda Swing 8/31/2014

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/26/2014 5:14:00 AM

You have used imagery and metaphors in such a beautiful, poetic mix Brenda! Welcome to PS family! ^_^ <3

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2014 6:30:00 PM

Brenda, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 9:19:00 AM

You are welcome, Brenda,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:23:00 AM

Hi Brenda, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Brenda Swing
Date: 9/2/2014 8:59:00 AM

Oh my! Thank you every one for a wonderful welcoming:)Looking forward to reading every ones work

John Posey

Date: 9/2/2014 6:03:00 AM

Very well done.... you will create a following with posts like this.... Welcome... You will be a credit to the Soup.... Love ya dearly.... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2014 1:01:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Brenda - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Swing
Date: 9/1/2014 3:02:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne,I am not a writer yet,but have enjoyed many years now.

Brenda Swing

Date: 9/1/2014 7:47:00 AM

Thank you very much for the welcoming Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/31/2014 10:14:00 PM

Hi Brenda, I really enjoyed reading this deep, powerful write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita