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Sizzling Summer summer sun sizzles sans sunshade shelter sunburn scalds she sprints scorched sand to shore swizzles in soothing sea Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Short Forms For Summer Part 3 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Modern Tanka Judged: 05/27/2016

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Date: 6/9/2016 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful alliteration Sandra, it me fell the heat.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/10/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, James, for you visit and nice comment. Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 4:39:00 PM
unusual tanka written in complete alliteration - congrats on your win in andrea's contest!
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. Though I'd try something different! I appreciate your nice visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 9:50:00 AM
awesome win many congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/27/2016 9:03:00 PM
awesome alliteration in your tanka, Sandra. Would love to be swizzling in the sea right now. BIG congrats for your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked it, and I appreciate my nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/27/2016 7:34:00 PM
I am so happy to see this in the top three Sandra! Big congrats on your well deserved win! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie for your nice comment and rating! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/27/2016 2:36:00 PM
Great image and alliteration, Sandra!! I love it! ~ Congratulations on this lovely win. Regards // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paul. These short forms are fun to do! Sandra
Date: 5/27/2016 9:54:00 AM
Wow sandra how well you created a rhythmic alliteration here... Congrats on your win. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lukas! Sandra
Date: 5/23/2016 4:16:00 AM
Excellent. Very beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ravi. Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 3:12:00 PM
sizzling write Sandra and i love the clever alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 12:53:00 PM
- A delightful summer poems, Sandra - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 12:01:00 PM
Sensational Sandra! #7. ; )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra

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