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Size Does Matter(Eve)4 Daniel C.

Eve So much for Adam talking to the Lord. A conversation I am sure was bored . Asking God for a women for him to receive. Little did Adam know his EVE will be so easy to deceive. "Take a night cap" replied God. By morning she will own your Hot Rod. Adam waking up in such nagging pain. Along came Eve with much to gain. From Adam's rib Eve was formed. Nothing is impossible for God to transform. "Eve my dear I will follow you in everything you beliEve." "My love for you is sever, thanks for last nights relieve." Bare naked striped from lies, God gave Adam and Eve his bless. Walking around in nude allowing them to fell shameless. "When I was hungry Eve's duty was to feed me." "How could I say no to the apple against her naked body." Forgetting about the good and evil. Eve believed the male, we call the Devil. "Oh my God Eve what have you done!" "I am scared like a coward lets run!" "Eve how could you believe another man?" "Was his slither easier to understand." Eve replied,"The snake promised me everything." "I didn't know he was pulling my string." "The snake said there is an A in the apple for me to weave. "With a vision Adam one day you will leave." "He said Adam is sometimes the I in Eve." "He will also betray you with his own deceive." "He said sometimes you will accept me when I conceive." "Adam it was to much for me to perceive!" "His tongue mentioned you will cost me to much grieve." "Believe me he said I will be the only one in achIeve." Adam says "Eve lets just hide from the Lord." Eve tells Adam "To late we already pulled the cord." "Do not worry I will bare it all." "You will not be there when I call." "The snake let me see with his crystal ball." "I will break when you let me fall." "Somehow you will always make me cry." "You will drain me, and hang me out to dry." "Still I will walk with my head up high." "Knowingly it is my fault for being mislead, this I do not deny." "For all the things you will ever do to me." "I will marry you and cause you so much hell you see." "I will take advantage of all material things." "Make you buy me the most expensive rings." "You followed me into our first sin." "Men are weak when it comes to us women.' "Yes I will find you in them Gentleman Club." "Even than you will be a poor little lost wolf cub." "I am Eve and I doomed us all once." "I am here to offer my condolence." "I gave up our happiness and paradise." "Listening to the snake, on how big it is in size." 4 Daniel Cwiak=Adam

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Date: 2/13/2016 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being future this week Poet Destroyer A. The verse that has caught my attention is the following, " Men are weak when it comes to us women ." It holds much truth indeed. It's a witty and amusing poem that I have enjoyed reading. Best Wishes & Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:46:00 AM
Hi Linda. I love your philosophical and intriguing take on your poem!!! Congrats for having it featured in the poetry soup homepage!!! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:17:00 AM
This had me grinning the whole way through, Linda. :-)
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Date: 5/18/2015 10:22:00 AM
Your updated bible makes for an interesting read, Linda! There are lots of bits and pieces here that need going over to bring out their real meaning. Liked your 'eve' popping out from various words. I believe that size does matter. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/1/2014 12:44:00 AM
Wow, neat!
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:30:00 PM
Not quite the Genesis version, but amusing none the less. Good write.
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Date: 7/4/2013 11:36:00 AM
Coming by to wish you happy 4th of July ;}
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Date: 12/21/2012 4:39:00 AM
this would have to be one of the best i've read of yours,, this so clever,, amazing poem....
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Date: 3/27/2012 10:06:00 PM
I'll tell ya back here. It was a contest by a new poet here. THe name of the contest is on my poem I think and you can see the winners list showing over at the contest winners' page. It's a new form for everybody. ya win some ya lose some. but I wish I knew what I did wrong with mine. I can understand why I lost the other one, the chiasmus contest. my entry was too complex I think. wEll, I'm OUTTA here. Shoulder killing me and I'm going to watch my recordings of shows since I left for Iowa!!
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Date: 7/16/2010 7:07:00 AM
an interesting tale of sweet serenity turned into sour seduction.and the apple turns rotten like flesh in an oven.still we covet what we cannot catch.everyday a crazed conception gets hatched.light a candle light a match and turn that evil garden into fire.still i never quench my darkest desires.just like adam and eve,with destruction i conspire
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:36:00 PM
nice one,very interesting.
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:11:00 AM
BEEN THERE DoNE THAT.-SKAT
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Date: 6/11/2010 4:04:00 PM
SO TRUE! And so dang funny! One of the best I've read! Keep writing, try to sell, and if you don't sell, then keep writing anyway for the sake of immortality
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Date: 6/9/2010 10:36:00 PM
Imagery . . . Good read. Very creative.
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:40:00 PM
You have put down a lot to consider. Yes, the story is an allegory and relates to all things in life. I would really like to thank you for your comment.
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:29:00 PM
YES WELL DONE. HAPPY CHEERS 2 YA. skat
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:28:00 AM
well written big smile .. Love Jayne x x x
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:19:00 PM
excellent, great story
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed your little yarn about the heart's talk to it's mind PD. Excellent Couplet about the fault of the pear(pair) on the ground, made of the ground. Smile. Thanks for your comments today. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:56:00 AM
Thanks on "Dolores", well mow you know here..but so does God..one lady said she should be Satan's wife..so see what happens next..thanks Danny
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:40:00 AM
Hope my P.D. BBF is doing well today and wanted to share a "hello" early morning.. started out by reading Psalm 33 .. and now its all good again... my eye surgery went well as my new blog tells and a day or two to heal..then other one next week.. then back in full swing... have a great day..luv ..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:37:00 AM
Was this for a contest if so should be a winner....Like the combined effects of Eve in the words ....Don't necessarily agree with all that you have said but a good work...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2010 1:54:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for the poem and the dedication...I don't know what to say except that you have a natural gift for the thought process once you have made a choice on the direction of your theme. Thanks, again! Dan C
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Date: 6/2/2010 12:21:00 AM
I could NOT stop reading this one... So great!!!
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:47:00 PM
....I shall say it again: it is always very nice when a poet or a poetess, can breathe life into their words and, cause them to rise and to dance, atop the page of the stage of their gifted and precious verse!! ~ "You" did that here dear I do believe! Smile, "Excellent Work, With Light!!" ~ Smile, "My Love & Warmth To You, & All You Love," John! ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Night, Dear Pd," Bye!:)
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