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Sixteen Is a Sweet Age

this sweet sixteen self should not dare sail away from the safe habour no matter how sweet-talking boys are or archaic parents sound it has dumped dollies for ‘fun’ boys and has privileges and rights but one day it has to unlearn the habit of turning on lights for romantic rather than economic reasons when other sixteens’ ballooning bellies heave in sight because of boys` menacing lethal guns or when their bodies lose their natural radiance because debauchery has ruthlessly ravaged them and turned their age absolutely upside-down with moderation and vision and honesty l have to enjoy life because time flies faster than a silhouetted butterfly 18 December 2012

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Date: 5/9/2013 10:37:00 AM
This was very well written Ndaba. Ironically I wrote a poem a few years back, the day before my 16th birthday. One can't help, but have these feelings... it takes bravery to not put these thoughts into actions. The silhouetted butterfly line was a nice touch... and indeed it DOES fly faster!
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:45:00 PM
I enjoy reading your reflections here on the age of sweet sixteen. you write very maturely on topics, ndaba.
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 2/1/2013 3:50:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/26/2013 2:52:00 PM
Absolutely moving.. What a great read..
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/26/2013 2:59:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by!
Date: 1/8/2013 4:29:00 PM
Ndaba, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. always~pd
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/8/2013 4:56:00 PM
PD, thank you!
Date: 1/6/2013 5:43:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/7/2013 1:42:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/5/2013 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Ndaba!! Happy New Year and Good day! :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/5/2013 10:58:00 AM
Maria, thank you!
Date: 1/2/2013 8:02:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations and Happy New Year :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/3/2013 6:18:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/1/2013 7:24:00 PM
Powerful write..congratulations on your win..Hugs, Holly Moore
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/3/2013 7:35:00 AM
Compliments of the season to you. Thanks.
Date: 1/1/2013 4:45:00 PM
Really such a beautiful poem Ndaba and congrats on you win too :D, thank you for your kind visit to my page, it's really a pleasure :D, wishing you a happy new year as well ^^
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/3/2013 6:17:00 AM
Most welcome!
Date: 1/1/2013 7:48:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear Ndaba! Happy New Year, too! hugs, Leonora
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/1/2013 11:36:00 AM
Leonora, thank you so much. Wishing you a happy, peaceful and prosperous 2012!
Date: 12/31/2012 5:32:00 PM
congrats and Happy New Year!
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/1/2013 11:38:00 AM
Many thanks for the message, and have a Happy New Year as well!
Date: 12/31/2012 4:32:00 PM
Ndaba congrats on your win..have a Happy New Year..David
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 1/1/2013 11:39:00 AM
David, compliments of the season to you! Thanks.
Date: 12/31/2012 2:18:00 PM
Big congrats Nbada, and all the best for the new year xx
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 12/31/2012 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, Mandy. I wish you a great new year.
Date: 12/26/2012 8:14:00 AM
thank you Ndaba for sharing your nice write...wishing you have a blessed day :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 12/26/2012 9:05:00 AM
Sukmawati, thank you. Have a great day, too.

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