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Six Random and Rather Ridiculous Observations Concerning Love

1: If love is a game we need a referee 2: How do I love thee? Let me count the ways! Um… 3: I loved her to death but got off on a technicality 4: Star-crossed lovers occasionally get crossed up and can get rather cross about it too 5: She stole my heart and REFUSED to return it so now I'm a heartless person 6: So I begged her to please have a heart and she said, “I already got TWO you idiot!”

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2015 8:57:00 AM

btw, thank you for passing by my write, and for all that you say-- that's actually written about 2 years ago, I think? Haven't been writing as much, if at all. Have some stuff in my head, but mostly lengthy rambling thoughts, who knows, might post it here...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2015 8:54:00 AM

I wat to temted to wite dit way to you wud knaw it wat me, Tim! Haha! Teryutly :)! And please, no worries please on not knowing it was me--myself to blame, since I keep changing my name. I am really happy for you, and you deserve it :)! I hope everything else in life is doing great with you-- me, have started to be busy with school. Your observations about love are spot-on! I especially enjoyed 5 & 6!

Constance La France

Date: 6/30/2015 8:51:00 AM

Tim, this a delightful 7 and thanks for visiting my death poem and for the comment

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/29/2015 12:36:00 PM

Dragon and I will come out and play with you... to cheer you up... LOL ...Loved your list. It's a cool one. Hubby got a smile out of it.

Carol Eastman
Date: 6/29/2015 12:42:00 PM

PS. Let me know if my silliness is bothering you... It's just that everyone's on vacation... and Dragon and I want to come out and play... But we'll be good if you want us too... Honest!... You read like... someone who might not mind me pestering you. Let us know.

Anna Hopper

Date: 6/26/2015 6:04:00 AM

Haha! Thanks for the laugh this morning! Well written and creative!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/26/2015 5:13:00 AM

Lol. "If love is a game we need a referee". That referee would be working overtime :-)