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Sit and Cry

Gone are his days of happiness He is a lonely man instead Gone are his days of happiness No waves of kindness to caress So suddenly his wife had died Leaving a broken man to sit and cry Gone are his days of happiness Form: Rondelet Dated 11/12/2012

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Date: 12/19/2012 10:12:00 PM
Seren, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd
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Date: 12/15/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Sass love , happy to share a spot with you xx
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Date: 12/14/2012 4:02:00 PM
HI Seren nice write! you needed 4/8/4/8/8/8/4 in syllable count...no matter I enjoyed it Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 6:13:00 PM
oh just saw that you placed it, that was nice of you. Thanks
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 6:11:00 PM
lol Debbie I never get it right, thanks for the info will write it in my notebook for future reference.
Date: 12/12/2012 9:10:00 PM
Oh dear this is sad, life can be a bitch sometimes xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/13/2012 5:46:00 AM
Yea it sure can ...Seren
Date: 12/11/2012 8:44:00 PM
Oh this is a sad one...It reminded me of my dog that I just lost as I started reading it..A very nice Rondelet write Seren..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/11/2012 9:11:00 PM
Haha my ipad doesnt like O's by the look
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/11/2012 9:10:00 PM
Oops anither Ipad typo, should say Sorry
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/11/2012 9:09:00 PM
Sorty to hear of your dog, its a wrench to the heart when that happens Dan .I know too well...Seren

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