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Sisters

Close in age they are Fight at a given chance, Sitting at opposite ends While each other they'll glance. Don't like much seperation But enjoy some private space, Life would be so unbearable If on was gone without a trace. Shareing their little secrets Playing some prank or two, Say to each other leave right now Alone they are lost as to what to do. Sister's they will always be Riverely between them as well, But no matter what may happen They love each other one can tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 9/13/2008 6:19:00 AM
congrats jodie on this being featured I have 4 sisters and would not trade em for the world well maybe just 1 of them lol great imagery and flow also keep up the great writing
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Date: 9/10/2008 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2008 9:07:00 AM
I was the oldest of 5 brothers, no sisters. My wife had 2 brothers, so my daughter is spoiled as would have been a sister had we had one. Great write, Jodie. Congratulations on having it featured. Vince
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Date: 9/8/2008 3:45:00 PM
I can relate to this one as I have two sisters of my own whom I've remained close to. Love the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/8/2008 3:38:00 PM
Aw, sweet poem! Congratulations Jodie on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/8/2008 4:43:00 AM
I reckon sisters and brothers feel close to the same after reading this - Congrats on being featured
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