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Sister Time

Where did she come from I asked, my eight year old heart beating fast. Well, take her back ... this can't be meant to last! When she was three, I tied her to a neighbors' tree and ran home with glee ... our parents were not amused. At 15, when she was seven, I was all about: Don't Tell Momma as we rode around with my latest boy in his '58 Ford. I left home at 17 and never looked back. Estranged is a painful track. I never knew sibling rivalry as eight years apart was too big a gap. Now in my 60's and she is 58 as we come to love more as sisters before it is too late, those eight years don't even exist. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ for Nathan's "Sibling Rivalry" contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 10/24/2009 3:56:00 PM
Sue u have captured the love between sisters so well with this poetic accolade of your youth.. I, too, have a sister who is 12 years younger than I and we are close as 2 peas in a pod now.... thankxxx for sharing and for your wonderful encouraging comments on my poetry.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 8/5/2009 10:40:00 AM
how true and a NICE win! Please add to my blog your insight. Light & Love
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Sue, for your placement in Nathan's sibling rivalry poetry contest. Very nice. I am so glad that you two were able to grow into love. Isn't it wonderful!?! Always, DAS-J
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win... Time is a great perspective. BG
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Sue.rgds Brian
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Date: 8/4/2009 7:47:00 AM
ongratulations. Of course she caught up with you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:34:00 AM
Touching and real! A wonderful poem, and a great win in Nathan's contest. Congratulations, Sue!!
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Date: 8/4/2009 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Nathan's contest Sue . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 2:22:00 AM
Congratulations on 4th place in my contest! Nate.
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Date: 7/31/2009 10:58:00 AM
A beautiful free verse, Sue. I wish I had a sister now :( Thank you for your comment. Love, iolanda
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Date: 7/28/2009 9:58:00 AM
Ahhh..the memories of youth. Great write. Keep on painting with your words...Lary
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:31:00 AM
oh, this is very interesting...as we come to love more as sisters before it is too late, those eight years don't even exist. great write, i sent you a sopupmail hope you have checked it. Adeleke
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:45:00 PM
great entry in Nathan's contest! Sue! I'm glad you are spending some quality time with your Sister! Family is big for me!!! and thanks always for your support, love, jimbo
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:33:00 PM
My sister and I were years apart as well, might as well have been worlds. We never clicked, just feigned sisterhood. But we still see each other occasionally. Great entry btw!-AA
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:07:00 PM
Glad this ended on an uplifting note. Yes, eight years as a child is certainly a hard gap to bridge. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. See your Soup Mail. Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 2:24:00 PM
any body seen sue mason she's been summoned by karen o leary for the spooky tales game!!!!!!! jhl
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:16:00 AM
Quite often, the sibling whom we battled as kids, become our best allies as adults.. I'm glad to see this has happened for you. ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:51:00 AM
That's a wonderful poem Sue. I like it and by the way thanks for the comments i really appreciate.
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