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Sister Bears

Deep in the meadow, where deer run wild in the open, Papa bear was waking his two cubs from their sheltered den. "Go out and play Cailyn and Jess, go discover something new, and always remember you take care of me and I take care of you" Jess went running as fast as can be leaving her little sister behind. She wanted to run to the river to see what fishes she could find. "wait up wait up" Cailyn shouted and hollered at her sisters back. She followed slowly and carefully inside her sisters foot track. Jess shouted back "Sis why can't you just let me be. I don't need you right now and you don't need me" This made little bear Cailyn so very sad, she ran and hid Crying and crying from what her sister cub just did Off in the distance she could here Jess scream " Cailyn, Cailyn, come help. I'm stuck in the stream" Cailyn went running as fast as her little legs would go Having to help her sister, the only friend she did ever know She just got there in time as Jess was about to fall Reaching Cailyn helped her out, whew what a close call The two dirty cubs went home to be with their dad They fell a sleep in the then den, both of them glad Papa bear's advice these two little bitty bear cubs was so true "Always remember you take care of me and I take care of you." Children's Fable Contest 07/07/2014

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Date: 7/18/2014 2:41:00 PM
A nice Duet...PD
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 7:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda... Hugs from both me and Casarah
Date: 7/16/2014 7:43:00 AM
Awesome, you two! Double congrats!.. You should write a children's book, or have you?.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Arlene...Both Casarah and I have young daughters and read a lot of stories to them..This kind of writing is fresh in our mind. We haven't written any children's books but it is something to ponder....hugs Tim
Date: 7/16/2014 4:30:00 AM
wonderful lesson learned, CT... much enjoyed!..sweet congrats!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thanks nette from both me and Casarah ...hugs Tim
Date: 7/16/2014 12:55:00 AM
Very lovely write ,, I loved it ,, congrats on top win!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma from the both of us...hugs Tim
Date: 7/16/2014 12:11:00 AM
Nice little story. congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Joyce from me and Casarah...Your comment is much appreciated...Tim
Date: 7/15/2014 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations. This was very creative. I enjoyed it. Happy Writing and God bless you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Regina from both Casarah and myself....hugs Tim
Date: 7/15/2014 7:26:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations guys:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan... we can have one great big group hug :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thank you you are terrific Jan!!! :)
Date: 7/15/2014 7:12:00 PM
<3 This. Congrats on your win :D
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 8:53:00 PM
Me and Tim both thank you on this sweetheart hugs :)
Date: 7/15/2014 7:03:00 PM
Cute story, but I'll bet Momma Bear would have kept a better eye on them... ;) Congratulations!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Roy from Casarah and me... I think momma bear went to see the Chippendales :)
Date: 7/15/2014 12:01:00 PM
...and those are the bear facts. Congrats on the win CT.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 5:59:00 PM
Thank you John from both me and Tim who co-wrote under this account :)
Date: 7/15/2014 10:59:00 AM
There were tremendous poems in the contest and yours was one of the best. I loved your moral of the poem... Many didn't display their moral near so well. Thank you for entering my contest and for letting me display your work here for all on PoetrySoup to see.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Carol...Both Casarah and I are honored to be a part of this wonderful contest...This was a tribute to my two beautiful girls.....hugs
Date: 7/14/2014 8:36:00 PM
Who told you Tim. I have two pairs and one with an odd sock in the was ha ha. loved your poem great keep it up. Pete.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Peter, I'm glad you enjoyed our poem :)
Date: 7/14/2014 8:02:00 PM
Oh what a lovely story. So visual. I'm sat here in bed in my jim jams,what a great bedtime story, with a good message. We need each other. thank you for sharing and making me smile needed that. take care. Pete.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2014 8:23:00 PM
I heard your jim jams were in the wash...lol
Date: 7/8/2014 6:49:00 AM
hahahah :D love this one.. :) well there is a short song which i can relate to this about bears.. :) weeeee the images of the bears are soo cute.. :D well, im weak regards to bears though.. :D
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/8/2014 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Olive....I love it as well... :) hugs :)
Date: 7/7/2014 10:48:00 AM
OH this is delightful Hope it does well in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2014 11:53:00 AM
Not for long I fear Tim:-( will see Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/7/2014 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Janbear....You are our number 1 supporter....hugs Tim

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