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Can you hear me my sweet precious, for the dream I also see.. ~ ~ Alice bow in rose petal grandeur to leave her stage once again a sincere pulsing adieu curtains close to face life once again She tumble down brightly lit passage gathering sticks and stones of muse to build a great fortress awaiting so soon life's stage shall prove If in that moment pulsing if only a slight shadow reveal emotes a great revelation then for her a dream did prove Carrying out through her kingdom as time refuse to cease a wondrous mind creation of youth she'll always see ~ ~ Can you hear me my sweet precious, for the dream I also see.. Alice my love, hold forever your days of youth, dream always, your Sister _______________________________ A Debbie Guzzi Contest

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Date: 6/21/2011 9:23:00 PM
It remnds me also of Peter Pan with its discussion of sweet youthful dreams. Great entry. I am glad to see it on the list, and Congratulations to you, Rick.
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie's "Go Ask Alice" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:43:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of debbie, Rick
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:59:00 AM
a round of cheers for your happy win, rick.. original! :) huggs
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:31:00 AM
A mystical and emotive piece here Rick, best wishes in the contest with this, and i appreciate the (great placement win) you awarded me..!
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:56:00 PM
This is just outstanding Rick, really, so well written , best of luck in the contest, but I think you are a winner for sure ... and thanks so very much for my placement in your Choka contest, with my poem, Lost in the Past, writing it brought back some sad and happy memories of Grandpa, I am very honored~~
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:12:00 PM
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:20:00 PM
ahhhhhhhh YOU, my budling, champion, Knight warden, ah yes to sway with the nubile hips of youth toward the full roundness of dawning....
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:31:00 PM
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