Sister

my feelings are hurt all my hopes have been put down but that don't matter ______________________ dedicated to my sister who is under depression i love you:-)

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Walker Neese

Date: 4/30/2009 11:19:00 AM

thanks raven u to

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/17/2009 2:20:00 PM

A wonderful way to show your support for your sister. Your love shines on her and will help her through her darkest hours. Great writing, very touching. Peace, Love, and Light be with you and yours always. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P.

Date: 4/17/2009 3:43:00 AM

i am very sorry .. your love and faith will get her through ... and she will get well! take care! ~ Arany

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2009 1:57:00 PM

I'm sorry your sister is battling depression. She is lucky to have you. Your lovely poem reveals how much you care for her. She probably needs your support more now than ever before. Very thoughtful senryu, Raven!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/16/2009 1:44:00 PM

raven, see mail, jmg

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2009 12:37:00 PM

Loneliness is the enemy, I hope your sister can find some help. Sad dedication...Raul

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 4/16/2009 11:37:00 AM

raven i feel 4 u