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Sir

Studly's

Dance

Partner

Sir Studly put out his cigarette when the band played a minuet. Did he ask me to dance? You bet! And that’s when I began to sweat. No lessons had I, least not yet; still I stomped on the floor like a vet. Sir Studly soon began to fret; an assault on his toes I beset. Two small feet became quite a threat, not to mention my toe ring baguette! He did not see me as a coquette, as he came after me with a net. I must say I have no regret; there’s a lesson here I won’t forget: Make sure your dance steps are preset ‘fore you dance with a studly brunette.
January 9, 220 For William Kekaula’s “First Time Here – Any Monorhyme” poetry contest

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Date: 7/26/2020 10:44:00 AM
LOL, loved this fun write
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Date: 1/20/2020 4:06:00 PM
Awsome! Love the accompanying visual. Really original thought and word-craft.
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Date: 1/16/2020 9:21:00 PM
Hello Carolyn … two left feet never helped me either. You're done a really top job here Carolyn. It's not easy finding a host of rhyming words that keep a story flowing - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:13:00 PM
Wow! Marvelous words that you appropriated Carolyn, my heartfelt thanks for your participation my poetess friend, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
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Date: 1/14/2020 8:32:00 PM
lol... this one literally made me laugh.. love your humorous monorhyme... wonderful penning... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:42:00 PM
Hello Carolyn Devonshire, a lesson here to be learned. Thank you for the chuckle. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2020 11:40:00 PM
Fun and rhyme at best.. Great entry in the contest..
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Date: 1/13/2020 10:05:00 AM
A fun write dear Carolyn - entertaining and humorous as well as very cleverly penned. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/12/2020 2:12:00 PM
A real nice fun piece Carolyn, well penned bringing in some good humour. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 1/11/2020 12:33:00 PM
This made me smile Carolyn. I hope this does well in the contest. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2020 10:13:00 AM
A lovely and entertaining poem in monorhyme form,Carolyn. I hope to see this on the winners' list! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/9/2020 4:24:00 PM
Haha loved the humour Carolyn, having two left feet I tend to keep off the dance floor lol. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/9/2020 3:13:00 PM
Sir Studly...love the name. It's a good thing the dancer who took the awkward steps wasn't the studly one, or your little toes would've suffered even more. Cute write, Carolyn.
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Date: 1/9/2020 3:07:00 PM
Excellent poetry Carolyn in rhythm of dance steps, just as the photo illustrates. A fun read--much enjoyed the story you created. A sure win my friend.
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:35:00 PM
What a delightful and creative write, Carolyn, and bound to be at the top of the winner's list for sure! Glad you enjoyed the New Year's celebration write. They AdAMan club sure puts on a remarkable fire works display each NY eve. Enjoy your sunny & warm weather - we are scheduled for cold and snow tomorrow - Bob H
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/9/2020 4:05:00 PM
jealous of your snow!
Date: 1/9/2020 1:18:00 PM
Love your form and wordplay. Excellent use of every syllable. Wonderful.Ann
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:07:00 PM
Times change! I had no idea modern dancers got anywhere near each other! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/9/2020 12:55:00 PM
oh how witty and a very clever Monorhyme Carolyn, I hope you waltz to the top of the contest winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/9/2020 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Just having a bit of fun.
Date: 1/9/2020 12:40:00 PM
Ha, ha! Hadn't seen/heard the word 'studly' in a bit. Time for it to make a comeback! :) gw
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/9/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Gershon. Sometimes we just write poetry for fun...

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