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Sir Punt

The Garden of Eden had a snake That slithered around when on the make It found that Eve Fit like a sleeve 'til Adam's apple snagged the mistake

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Date: 10/24/2022 11:56:00 AM
Glad you "shed" some light on their story! Always witty never dull!
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Date: 10/23/2022 7:34:00 PM
Snapple anyone? Lol, rico
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Date: 10/23/2022 3:18:00 PM
Sir Punt, The Snake Adam's apple ate. Very humourous, witty and clever. Thank you, Rico. Still smiling, Old Duck
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Date: 10/22/2022 9:52:00 PM
Oh my.... thiis is terrific ! Your stock never exhausts, dear Rico ! Keep on entertaining us.....
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/23/2022 10:45:00 AM
Who could imagine a Garden of Eden without snakes? Aloha!
Date: 10/22/2022 3:17:00 PM
The great thing is you have over 2000 years of subject matter to fill your wonderful limericks. We will never be tired of seeing what masterpieces you come up with next. Love this one.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/23/2022 10:44:00 AM
With so many scriptures, who needs a muse? Aloha!
Date: 10/22/2022 2:18:00 PM
Another gem, Rico!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/23/2022 10:44:00 AM
Mahalo, Ilene! Aloha!

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