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“God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma As also this dopamine boosting flavour I taste I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste”
Since the Christian body is a Holy Temple, Which houses the Holy Spirit of my Lord and Savior, Am I desecrating His Spirit when I drink coffee? What about drinking tea, or Coke or Pepsi? Never giving thought about the effects Of drinking coffee, tea, soft drinks Upon The Holy Spirit which lives within Maybe today is the perfect day for those thoughts to begin My mother gave me a small amount of coffee In my cup in the morning Maybe a teaspoon or two Filled the cup with milk I never knew it might not be good for me A child learns from their carers What to eat and what to do She gave me a juice glass of tea at lunch Now is the time to think it through Cutting down my decaf coffee This morning to half I'll see if I can make it today One day at time If I can make it today I can make it tomorrow Then who knows what I can do
1 Corinthians 6:12 ESV “All things are lawful for me,” but not all things are helpful. “All things are lawful for me,” but I will not be dominated by anything. Isaiah 40:30-31 ESV Even youths shall faint and be weary, and young men shall fall exhausted; but they who wait for the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings like eagles; they shall run and not be weary; they shall walk and not faint. Romans 14:1-23 ESV As for the one who is weak in faith, welcome him, but not to quarrel over opinions. One person believes he may eat anything, while the weak person eats only vegetables. Let not the one who eats despise the one who abstains, and let not the one who abstains pass judgment on the one who eats, for God has welcomed him. Who are you to pass judgment on the servant of another? It is before his own master that he stands or falls. And he will be upheld, for the Lord is able to make him stand. One person esteems one day as better than another, while another esteems all days alike. Each one should be fully convinced in his own mind. ... Romans 12: 1-2; I appeal to you therefore, brothers, by the mercies of God, to present your bodies as a living sacrifice, holy and acceptable to God, which is your spiritual worship. Do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewal of your mind, that by testing you may discern what is the will of God, what is good and acceptable and perfect. 1 Timothy 5:23 King James Version 23. Drink no longer water but use a little wine for thy stomach's sake and thine often infirmities. unfinished

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Date: 1/7/2024 8:58:00 AM
Your musing is contageous, Sara! I come to the conclusion that to live we have to eat and drink, but not to overdo it. We have to look after our body (health), so it makes sense to avoid that which harms the body. Having said that, I love my coffee but stay away from alcoholic drinks. Of course, "one day at (a) time" helps you to give up things without feeling any pressure :) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/7/2024 1:08:00 PM
Paul, thank you. I made it fine today with only 1/2 of the cup of decaf coffee so I can do it tomorrow. I know that it will be good for me in the long run because it will help keep my heart from racing. I have never been one to drink alcoholic beverages either. I have seen the effects of what it can do to a person's life and those around them. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Date: 1/7/2024 4:40:00 AM
Oh, quite a deep and spiritual poem that dwells in a thought-provoking essence! Love the intriguing direction that you've taken with this as well as your captivating wordplay.. I actually can't have coffee due to high blood pressure and increased heart rate..it creates a troublesome situation for the heart.. Also, it triggers anxiety in some way. You've wonderfully conveyed the ideas here in a brilliant way.. Enjoyed reading this dear Sara, sending love :)
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:20:00 AM
Hiya, Yes, coffee can run the blood pressure up and also the heart rate. It probably would be best if no one drank it, but when I was young, it help me get motivated. Or was it pouring a cup of ambition. Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thoughts. Sara K
Date: 1/6/2024 11:50:00 PM
What a deep and intriguing write this is, i actually am not a coffee lover, i drink only sometimes, afogatto, and also mocha. I love how you’ve questioned too here and how well you’ve written for the theme of the prompt: so well delivered: pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:28:00 AM
IE, Dairy Queen sells an iced coffee drink that is wonderful, but alas, I stopped consuming it years ago because of the calories and now the caffeine in it would cause havoc on my heart. Thanks for dropping by with your nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 1/6/2024 5:36:00 PM
I sometimes wonder about the effects of the caffeine on the body I was given. I appreciate the Biblical verses...thought provoking poem. Have a great evening, Sara K....and a joyous, caffeine-free new year :-) smiles, Sara B
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:26:00 AM
Sara B, well, I don't think I can cut it out altogether, but who knows maybe I can. I am down to one cup of decaf coffee now. Occasionally I have a glass of tea. If I make brewed tea at home, it is decaf tea. The caffeine does have a detrimental effect on me. It increases my heartrate and raises my blood pressure. I am going to try to decrease my consumption by 1/2 over the next few weeks to try to avoid getting a headache. We'll see how it goes. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

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