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January 3, 2024

For Unseeking Seeker's Sipping Coffee Contest

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In the tawny twilight hours at the edge of the void life, perched on the sea shore of foaming contention, with the coffee cup full of fulfillment in hand I see the dusky desires reach the drowning horizon in fraction. The aromatic spectrum of the sunburst ecstasy brewed, surges from the swirl of aquatic gold in satiation breeze. In my enraptured perception it turns into elixir, fill my craving cup and I drink delighted to the lees. In my voyage in the shore of the fathomless faith, the fragrance of my soulful satisfaction I offer Him. The surrendered essence yearns to devoutly discern His euphoric perception, configured as bliss supreme. In the precincts of divinity I stand resolutely relinquished, surrender to Him my possession of enchantment I prize, offering Him my happiness to my heart’s content, I feel the joy of the absolute sparkle in my eyes. My submission kindles the candle of God’s benevolence, in its halo I perceive His power and presence spread, repulsing from my revived life the miasma of misery, and I discover the new me finding the holy path ahead. “God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma As also this dopamine boosting flavour I taste I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste” (Line of inquiry)

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Date: 1/12/2024 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 1/11/2024 3:32:00 AM
So skillfully presented, SSR, congrats on a job well done :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/11/2024 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, MRR for your encoiuraging comment.
Date: 1/11/2024 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/11/2024 9:19:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/3/2024 8:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Sipping Coffee" write/ending. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/3/2024 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.

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