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An ancient oak has been cut down Its leaves were always falling down Its sin was being messy An aged Weeping Fig on a paved parkway Town Council all agreed it could not stay Its sin was its roots that invaded the asphalt A towering Maple that grew next door Was also a victim of this war Its sin - was growing too close to the house The sins of trees are really sins of man. Who planted them without a plan. Contemplate these empty spaces and weep. These places left where a tree once stood Disturb a soul like nothing should. Accommodate and let them live Tail-Rhyme A Tail-Rhyme (also known as a tailed-rhyme) is a type of poem that has a very specific structure. In short, the piece begin with either a couplet or a triplet of lines that consist of rhymed lines. This set of either a couplet or triplet is then followed by a "tail", which is a fourth line that does not rhyme with the couplet or triplet that preceded it. This tail line tends to be shorter in length than those lines within the couplet or triplet. This type of poetry can also be used with stanza, known as a tail-rhyme stanza, but in these pieces, all of the tail lines rhyme with each other.

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Date: 4/17/2023 1:28:00 PM
I'm always saddened to see trees felled because man built too close to them or man planted them without forethought to their growth patterns. Nicely written SuZ! :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2023 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Linda. Yes it is always sad to see them gone with no say in the matter. Best, SuZ
Date: 3/23/2023 2:20:00 PM
Suzanne, this poem resonates, speaks to the sacred. Resurrected memories of when the council decided to remove all the street trees in the neighbourhood of my childhood home. Left an empty space which, to this day, still echoes an absence. The poem is a reminder of where a lack of reverence to nature takes us.
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Sam Scott
Date: 10/3/2023 8:55:00 PM
Sacredness is such a beautiful word in this context, Paul. Completely agree.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/24/2023 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Paul: I can never understand the mindset that misses that sacredness in nature and that also discount the time that a tree takes to grow that size. In many cases it won’t reach that size again in our lifetime but if we plant the next generation will benefit. Best, SuZ
Date: 3/22/2023 6:56:00 PM
Amen, Suzanne. Important message, penned so smoothly. ... Two of the very scenarios you wrote about have happened right on my block in the past four years. Thanks, gw
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/23/2023 5:08:00 AM
I understand, GW: the worst one Iv’e seen was written about in my poem, “Photograph of a Redwood Stump in Sepia.” It was chosen for one of the PS It’s Poetry Anthologies. SuZ
Date: 3/22/2023 3:59:00 PM
We are perpetually interfering and getting in the way of mother nature's grand design, whether building a house on the side of a cliff or paving her landscape for more parking lots no wonder she is mad! Brilliant woeful allegory, SuZ.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 5:28:00 PM
Yes I agree, Robert: We wonder at her breaking point. I wrote a poem about this called the Eyes of Mother Nature. SuZ
Date: 3/22/2023 11:59:00 AM
You are singing my song, SuZ. I couldn't agree more. I've been checking your page to see if you had posted a new poem. It was worth the wait:)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/22/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Daniel: I was lucky enough to get some inspiration today from a sawn off tree in a parking lot where I was waiting for my hubby to finish his Physio. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. You made it worthwhile. SuZ

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