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Sins' Chain Reactions

Sins - they are violations, faults, offenses Any forms of sins leads to ill guilt feelings Resulting from human's weaknesses and pride Disrupting disturbing human relationships Placing any cognitive being to shame and doubt {"To err is human, to forgive is Divine"} To each and every decision and action Us - human beings must never forget to discern Anything we do stimulates chain reactions If sin is seen, beforehand sternly spurn The devil will provide worldly attractions But, hear me Human... I appeal to you: BE FIRM! AWAY FROM TEMPTATION! AWAY FROM DEVIL'S SATISFACTION! Rather, integrity and a life eternal we must earn... BY olive_eloisa 12:32 am April 08, 2014 CONTEST: Three Stanza Suite Free Poetry Contest Details SPONSOR: Sheri Fresonke Harper 6TH PLACE

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/3/2016 10:24:00 AM

Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/8/2014 1:00:00 AM

Olive, anyone ever told you that most of your poems offer life lessons just like this beauty? I often come to your page before I go on with my day for pieces of good advice I know I'll find in your work. :3

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 6:19:00 AM

hahaha thanks much Jake.. :) i appreciate your comments.. :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/26/2014 6:49:00 PM

Good advice for the unwary human. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 4:49:00 AM

tHANKS SO MUCH joYCE.. :) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 4/26/2014 7:03:00 AM

Just stopped by to tell you congratulations once again Olive_eloi:) Still remember the short sermon you gave me first time we discussed this poem!!:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2014 9:23:00 AM

Lools.. Short sermon :D!!! Hahahaha but no this just a simple reminder.. :) thanks dearie Paul Congratulations as well for your win:) tea for a treat :D lools

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/26/2014 6:39:00 AM

Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2014 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Sir :) I'm happy for receiving comments from you..:) really appreciate it much:)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/8/2014 11:36:00 PM

Very good, You have captured this very well. An eternal life we must earn. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2014 9:26:00 AM

Thanks Lucilla.. :) I'm glad you find time to read Miya writing:) I hope you doing alright:)

Leon Wilson

Date: 4/8/2014 12:02:00 PM

Olive a nice poem but I disagree with your last line we cannot earn eternal life it is a free gift from God.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/8/2014 1:29:00 PM

Yes, it is true that it is freely given and offered by GOD but isn't it we must also work on it.... :) for at the end of our life our actions here on earth will be judged accordingly and it is then we will know.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2014 4:46:00 PM

Olive_eloi...today you are my teacher, giving me a lesson of character. I do try to be firm...but those banana skins are so slippery! and why are there so many of them?:) enjoyable read. :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/8/2014 1:14:00 PM

...I humbly bow to your reply...the young teach the old :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/8/2014 2:49:00 AM

:) many of them......... Hmmmmmn cause "us" let them to be many,., :o?! Sometimes we put the blame to them but sometimes we must see in us and ask have we tried to re-connect with them so they may see light??? .... Mmmmmmmmmmm--olive_eloi who wants to reach out for more