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Sinking In A Dream

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Sinking In A Dream

In the quicksand of words I slowly sink…
My arms covered in letters colorfully inked… 
My footing disappears as I stare at the sky…
Screaming poetic lines to keep me alive…
My faith is inevitable through this slow descend…
Dropped into a world where hearts never bend…
Sand covered benches and a view of the sea…
Shells shaped in letters that spell out free…
I scribe in the sand everything I’ve seen…
Only to awake knowing it was more than just a dream…


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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 10:28:00 PM
    it is a beautiful dream

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Im glad that I read this poem, Michael. It is more than just a dream.. Have a wonderful day.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 7:58:00 PM
    I feel this freedom within this write, I compose freely within my life, words that have meaning and composure! I really loved reading this amazing poem of intrigue and empowerment! What a terrific piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:43:00 PM
    What we dream about is usually influenced by our thoughts and wishes.I enjoyed sinking in your words and even put off my life jacket to.remain there.Nice to see you.posting Michael