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Sinister Encounter

Poe laid flowers on her grave His lost Lenore One he’d love forevermore But doomed to see her nevermore Storm clouds expelled true daylight Yet near her grave on a dead oak tree An ebony raven stared and seemed to agree “Nevermore,” the bird mocked, flying off with ironic glee Clouds burst, pelting the cemetery with rain Back to his horse and carriage Poe ran Was Poe a pawn in this raven’s game plan An unhealthy racing of his heart began Arriving home, Poe sought to forget But there was the red-eyed, sinister bird Perched on the pallid bust of Pallas, it said just one word “Nevermore,” was all Poe heard Stealthily the bird had entered through an open window “Did God summon you to add to my grief?” Poe pleaded, “Will I ever find relief?” “Nevermore,” cried the demon, to Poe’s disbelief Poe tried to rid his home of the tormenting invader “Fly away; take your word with you!” But the evil visitor would not bid adieu Its single word was malicious; Poe could not misconstrue When rainfall ended, the raven flew to the windowsill “Be gone!” Poe screamed, his voice filled with hate It eyed him once more, leaving Poe in a crazed state But loving memories of Lenore it could not desecrate *Written October 1, 2014

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Date: 10/15/2014 7:12:00 AM
WOW Carolyn - Chilling take on Poe's masterpiece which you have obviously read and studied often! I especially like your method of indentation, which makes it all the more compelling...HUGE congrats - Tim
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:56:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on ur awesome win Carolyn!
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Date: 10/13/2014 9:42:00 PM
Quite a unique write on Raven, congrats on the win, Carolyn
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:58:00 PM
How nice, a big first. Enjoy and congrats- FOREVERMORE! LNC
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:04:00 PM
A compelling narration, Carolyn. Your imaginative ability is aptly displayed in this sinister poem. Well done and congratulations on being placed first in Kelly's contest. Love and hugs // paul
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Date: 10/13/2014 5:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed your telling of the happenings, leading up to the writing of "The Raven". It adds a new chapter to Poe's classic story.... A terrific poem, Carolyn! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 10/3/2014 4:17:00 PM
This is "Top Self " material, Carolyn---you gave a new dimension to Poe's story about his lost Lenore, perhaps filling in some gaps. Since there is no ten, it will have to be a 7 .
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Date: 10/1/2014 11:50:00 AM
Wow an amazing write Carolyn! Love both the substance n the rhyme n fifth n sixth stanza the most! Great pen u hv !
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Date: 10/1/2014 7:12:00 AM
Ow dear Carolyn,a beautiful poem like this reminds me why I fell in love with your poetry about six years ago on poetry soup,and I don't say this just to fill the lines,but because I feel and I know what I am saying.Going to my favourites-Charma
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