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Sing, Birds Sing

Sing, Birds Sing Sun Smiling Gleefully Blushes blue dawn While robin's musing Pink-dogwood dreams Rejoicing Blooming Spring Where Playful Cardinal Hops, hops, and sits Then curves a sharp spin Flying up high Savoring Freedom Flight Lone Sparrow Sitting on Red maple tree Whistles and dances Reveling in Lilacs and Lilies White Sing Birds sing Exalting Season's beauty Warbling, frolicking Serenading Cheerfully Sing birds Sing Sing Of joy Of prairies Of giggling streams Of butterflies, bees Flowering trees Sing of hearts Sing of Love February 20, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Formed Contest Placed 3rd: Springtime Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsor: M. L. Kiser Syllables: 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/3/2023 5:17:00 PM

So lovely, Vijay. This jewel is a fave.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2022 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/16/2022 6:42:00 AM

Great ninette. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2022 5:43:00 AM

Once again back to this lovely poem with congratulations ! Glad you have once again started participating in Brian's contest!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/14/2022 7:02:00 AM

I loved the energy in your verses, the movement added to the flow nicely. Congrats on the high placement in the contest, Bill

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/7/2022 1:54:00 PM

Ok, I must confess, I am back to reread this beautiful joy filled serenade. I wanted to make sure it was in my favs. I'm so glad I checked; well, it is now <3 Have another beautiful day Vijay, I can hardly wait till you tell us about it with your flowing pen of graceful beauty <3 ~BJ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2022 4:51:00 PM

cute images of spring birds!! congrats for your win, Vijay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/25/2022 8:35:00 AM

Vijay, your ninette suite is so lovely and descriptive, a delightful piece. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2022 5:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/24/2022 2:06:00 AM

Your keen observation of nature and birds is just amazing Vijayji...Anyone who reads this would feel the bliss of spring and rejoice in it, through your words..."pink dogwood dreams", "giggling streams"...beautiful. As always, another lovely creation in Ninette form, best wishes in the contest...God bless...~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2022 5:08:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem Ani. Much delight to read your comments. Many many thanks.

Andrew John

Date: 2/24/2022 1:12:00 AM

This one makes me, too, sing of joy. Thanks, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2022 5:07:00 AM

Thank you John--I really like your comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/23/2022 1:56:00 PM

Oh wow, my friend. This is another one of your best! I love birds, spring and the cheerful tone of your poem. Uplifting and so pleasant! The sights you brought me to see are so nice . . A Fave for me. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2022 5:06:00 AM

You made my day with your wonderful comments, Heidi. Always a joy to hear from you my friend. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/23/2022 12:14:00 AM

So sweet! I want to join in this beautiful view and listen to the song of the birds. Beautifully penned <3

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:55:00 AM

You are a nature lover and all things uplifting. Much inspiration you convey, BJ. Many thanks.

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 2/22/2022 9:12:00 PM

This poem screams spring. Nicely written Vijay! ~Anna

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:53:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Anna. Thank for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/22/2022 6:44:00 PM

Love the poetry that fit the form majestically.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Harry for stopping by. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 4:22:00 PM

Super springy, Vijay!! filled with the exuberance of the season

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:52:00 AM

In spirit of spring. Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/22/2022 3:50:00 PM

Perfect joy in a ninette! Next to last verse is my favorite! Happy Day, dear Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:52:00 AM

Yes--l like it also. Much appreciate and value your feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 2/22/2022 7:08:00 AM

Today I'm sad, but i recognise a lovely poem that captures spring time. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2022 8:50:00 AM

Sorry for you loss Victor. Glad you stopped by--much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/21/2022 11:42:00 AM

"Giggling streams, of butterflies, bees . . . flowering trees" Such a delightful image. My heart is smiling and singing, all at the same time. I'm looking forward to Spring, and your words take me there, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. Always a delight to read your feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2022 10:17:00 AM

I love this formatting it gives further impetus to the poem.. You always know which words to use to create imagery in your poem... This is a very enjoyable write..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 1:19:00 PM

So special to hear that from you, SO. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 2/21/2022 7:51:00 AM

The very formatting of the poem is so appealing. The content gives a heavenly feel. All the images are arresting, but I love the image of the lone sparrow on the maple the most that whistles and dances. A contender for a top win !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 1:18:00 PM

Glad you liked the poem, Valsa. Always value your feedback. Much appreciate, as always.

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2022 5:56:00 AM

You did a great job with the theme Vijay, best for a top win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/21/2022 5:40:00 AM

How delightful! You have created such a wonderful cacophony of imagery~here's to Spring! Love this. And good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 6:11:00 AM

Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Paulette. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2022 4:35:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, This is a good entry for the contest. I could just picture each bird in your string of ninettes. It looks like a winner to me. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend-Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 6:10:00 AM

Many thanks for your supportive and cheerful comments my friend. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/21/2022 3:33:00 AM

Your words sang the arrival of Spring and my soul is dancing now!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 6:09:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem Swetha. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2022 10:06:00 AM

Hi Vijay dear friend, another glowing breathtaking write with your golden quill I have never tried writing a Ninette, but i doubt I could ever reach your extraordinary talented flair. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/21/2022 6:08:00 AM

So glad you stopped by Jennifer with your kind thoughts. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.