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just a soft whisper turns a heavy heart joyful ancient hymns of praise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/21/2023 7:00:00 PM
Very well penned. Excellent use of contrast from "soft" to "heavy." Your final line is an aptly expressed tie in. Congratulations! Brian
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Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 2/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Brian, music has been a gift which I have gladly received since my childhood. Glad you liked it.
Date: 2/14/2023 6:49:00 PM
Nice touch! I agree. Here's to Joy and More Joy!
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Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 2/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
Amen and amen!

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