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Since First I Saw You

Since first I saw you, it was your eyes, mesmerizing, your gaze transporting me to a realm, not of fantasy, real, where young men go when cupid’s arrow takes root. Since first I saw you, it was your lips, captivating, holding me frozen in anticipation of our lips brushing for the first time. Since first I saw you, it was your voice, a crescendo, light, invigorating, each word you speak intensifies my hearing, enveloping each note, time ceases as I hang motionless savoring, memorizing. Since first I saw you, it was your hair, long, flowing, gently rising above your shoulders as a slight breeze passes through sending waves of your essence my way. The sun magnifying each strand, highlighting the minute variances of invigorating color, creating a halo effect, a portrait of your beauty forever imprinted. Since first I saw you, It was you, my love forever more for you, only you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Mac on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2010 3:09:00 PM
You made me fall in love today!! congrats on your win!! pretty poem and romantic!
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:08:00 AM
Great expressions here- Congrats to you Mac- I married a girl with golden hair that seemed to glisten like a billion tiny suns
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:08:00 PM
wow, an awesome tribute. Wish my hubbie would write something like that for me. Congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Mac. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:48:00 PM
Very romantic and lovely. I bet she loves it too. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congrats Mac on your HM in Joe's contest.. this is a beautiful..and extraordinary write of great luv.. enjoy your special honor ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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