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Sin In Innocence

Moon hangs high and white coats the earth, breathe in and out. Frozen air in my lungs; his touch hurts. Racing thoughts hurry in a blur. Warm hands on my back, then run up to my hair. Hot lips press against my frozen face. He kisses me; my first. Now I know sin's taste. "Do you trust me"? No, but what will they think? What do they see? Pain in my pelvis; hot breath in my face. But this can't be it! Regret in eyes; pain in my heart. On the bed, how I cried. I wish for a second chance; and pray to god to forgive my first sin in Innocence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/24/2009 7:39:00 PM
wow emily. wow.wow.wow. its awsome
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Date: 11/22/2009 8:16:00 AM
Vivid expressions, lost innocence, good job, welcome to soup, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/20/2009 11:15:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Emily. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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