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Simultaneous Thoughts of Soul Mates Soon To Meet

"She" Like one of these tears that freed itself from my misted eyes, you've slipped away from me. Oh, that once again you'd caress my face like this tear which warmly slides down my cheek. "He" I watch you, sad lady, from my table and see myself that tear that trails your skin. While you think of someone else, I'm dying to be that tear that lingers on your mouth. For PD's Enter the romantic poems only. (old)Poetry Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/11/2011 10:54:00 AM

Waiting for a new poem from you...........even a Senryu will do!-kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/5/2010 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win in Jared Picket's contest "Tetractys". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/4/2010 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your success in Jared's contest. Agape, Moses

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/4/2010 8:17:00 PM

dying to be that tear that lingers on your mouth love it! then again if you haven't noticed i have for things for mouths...anywho! this is great love the theme congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2010 7:37:00 PM

Congrats on the HM win, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2010 6:27:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful write and awesome honor for u to enjoy my friend.. that poetry portfolio is growing very quickly.. way to go ..with luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/4/2010 5:50:00 PM

A twist on the contest, that you made cleverly!! Well done Andrea! Congratulations! Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/4/2010 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win!! well done

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/31/2010 8:52:00 PM

very sweet, and romantic, a longing love that the two can see. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Steven Mossburg

Date: 7/30/2010 7:10:00 PM

I've never attempted this style but you inspire me to try with this very well written poem. Thanks so much for you words of encouragement. Steve

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2010 9:18:00 AM

I know nothing at all about the Tetractys form of poetry but......I love this one that you have written. The best to you in the contest. I tried writting one and posted but....don't know if it is what it is suppose to be. Have a great weekend and rest up. Love, Carol

David Byrne

Date: 7/29/2010 7:30:00 PM

like the juxtaposition!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/29/2010 6:41:00 PM

oh ... sweet love brginnings!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2010 6:00:00 PM

Great write that is both love loss and love possibility in one write..Good idea...Very descriptive of emotion...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog..I was going to give you an answer about your question but I have forgotten what it was that I was going to say because under the influence of pain meds...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/29/2010 5:50:00 PM

A wonderful scene you have created between He and She. I do appreciate your creativity, Andrea. A sure thing for a higher placement.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/29/2010 4:20:00 PM

Unique and interesting entry for the contest Andrea... great splitting it into parts of conversation .. Jared will like am sure.. good luck my friend.. with luv..

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/29/2010 1:44:00 PM

Evening Sarah While you think of someone else , can relate to that the ones i always wanted were also thinking of someone else , Got 1 for you please read hand and tell me what you think its me trying to be romantic , like i said trying Cheers

John Freeman

Date: 7/29/2010 11:53:00 AM

Cool Cuatro Tetractys, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/29/2010 8:59:00 AM

Oh my what a sweet tetractys, Andrea! I really enjoyed how you related tears for each of them--pretty unique approach I think & how wonderful huh? I think the story you depict here is a great example of things happening for a reason?? Soulmates indeed! Loved how you did this in a "simultaneous" fashion! -- hugs-- nikko :)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/29/2010 8:42:00 AM

It seems that these'soul mates'are in love from a distance.Did you do it on purpose,mist my eyes with tears?lol,I wonder if he's watching,guess he is,wanting to be that tear,i guess he is all that she have,all that she is. .Who knows destiny,touching and a favorite,i can relate to such emotions. .C.C

Daver Austin

Date: 7/29/2010 8:14:00 AM

Hey! These two ought to get together before the tears dry up and reality sets in. Good write. Incidentally,the Spain visit didn't come through. My carrier has instituted a new display which somethimes fouls up. Love, Dave