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Simply Scorned

I can see it in their eyes their disdain piercing through my ignorant gaze rolling in discontent weakening my resolve as they close to dismiss my very existence I can hear it in their voices with deliberate tones of sarcasm to destroy my esteem throwing facetiously coy remarks to challenge my will outnumbered in unison to quell me into silence

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Date: 1/31/2017 5:04:00 PM
Very well written my friend. Very well done. May life be good to you.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 2/7/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Ricky.
Date: 1/31/2017 8:56:00 AM
This, is a great poem! GREAT poem! I don't know what caused it, I don't know what happened. I can only read it as poet reading poetry. And it is wonderful.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 2/7/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Darren.

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