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Simplicity Is a rope And a note Note Sanity was a plea Completely reversed you see Behind the bars Safe in the murky lurkings Of Ambient sentiments and whiskey sour The minds overreaching memories Existed or not Little matters Of loves long sifted Drifting closer to shore The boat demands the rope Be tied Just before, from my grasp I release The note

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Date: 10/3/2016 7:47:00 PM
The minds keep going there in the past indeed...just like a boat released at sea..till the shore it reaches...And the note flows free..So much to ponder here Arthur...So very deep.
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Date: 10/3/2016 6:57:00 PM
Big Smile. Yes I agreed with Tim.
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Date: 10/3/2016 12:37:00 PM
Sometimes things that look so simple really are complex.
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Date: 10/3/2016 2:26:00 AM
dark deep and sad my friend:-( hugs Jan xx
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