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Simplicity

There's such a simple thing as sitting on the porch Where summer rose of Sharon leaves overhang the rail I'm relaxed on our old fashioned swing made of slats Where a fine grey and white stray kitty cat has adopted us He prances gracefully and now and then rubs my legs with his tail Looking off I wonder at the avenue of great old trees They rise sky high lean to meet each other over the street Weather thus far has been hot to mild Today is mild I'm thinking....why don't I spend more time like this..... Why doesn't everyone spend more time like this? There is a pot of mixed flowers sitting on the post by the stairs and One or two early blossoms have burst out on the rose of Sharon tree The house next door has flowered nicely at the side The street so far as I can see is spotted with fine bloom Now a gentle breeze sweeps in just barely spreads and soothes my hair Yes this is pure luxury pure ecstasy Simplicity

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Date: 7/14/2010 12:45:00 PM
What a dreamy and softly whispered poem. I love this momentary escape...like sitting on a front porch of a big old house, and drinking in the day. Nicely done, Daver!! Thanks for this little escape! :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:53:00 PM
Daver, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I like the artistic presentation. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:07:00 PM
another one very very lovely. Is it one of your favorites as well? I love seeing the trees in bloom. It always happens here right around the middle of April and by now, my blooms have finished. Luv, Andrea ps when you floated, was it an out of body experience. I almost felt one time like i was on the verge of one of those. that would be the ultimate!
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Date: 8/3/2008 5:43:00 AM
Amazing in its truth and beauty. Well, I sure know why I don't spend more (or any) alone time like that - 5 kids! lol Although, we enjoy nature together, but that sweet, full vaporous alone time is as precious as gold. Beautiful! Kristin XO
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Date: 7/28/2008 12:34:00 PM
Yes, we do need to spend more time like this. Life has gotten so fast paced. Such a peaceful feel to your poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/27/2008 9:20:00 AM
Hi Daver A beautiful well written poem. I feel like I'm right there with you on the porch taking in the beautiful scent of the rose of sharon tree,along with the neighborhood view. Enjoyed! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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