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Silver Tails

A man saw four beauty queens of an ocean -- They were sitting on rocks; Relaxing, while stirring their long silver tails back and forth in water. Their healthy breasts and luring eyes hacked the man's heart; Lust raised beyond the horizon. They smiled at him and one of them said, "Come to us." Elatedly the man swam and reached to them. They circled him, and he came in jolly mood as they were together getting close to him. Smiling tenderly, they held him with their snow white hands. Out of the blue, Their eyes turned red as blood, and then they drowned him to the bottom of the ocean to death. ____________________________________ Date - 16th September 2016 Contest - What the hell. Sponsor - John lawless

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Date: 11/18/2016 2:58:00 PM
Augustus this poem was happy and sad.Yes I agree with Andrea you should put this in the contest. Good Luck...
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Date: 8/11/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Darlene for your suggestion. A.B
Date: 9/16/2016 8:29:00 PM
wow, that twist was good and creepy. YOu should put it into the contest of Scary poems!
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thanks a lot. Mam. Thanks for the suggestion, but I have already put this poem in the Brain's contest. I don't think we can include one poem in two contests.
Date: 9/16/2016 6:09:00 PM
A romantic, descriptive and very well told story. The twist was quite unexpected! ...Well done, Augustus. Good luck in Brian's contest!
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thanks Kelly. Your comment is vital for me. Have a nice day.

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