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Silver Strands

Each silver strand has a story to tell I watched them all appear As that dark haired beauty of a bride I took Journeyed with me through the years The first long streak of silver hair Made the scene on that tragic day When a driver who had too much to drink Sent her wonderful father on his way The second strand – on the other side Came after a night of angst and pain But her labor resulted in our first born son To whom we gave her father’s name There are strands there from the measles And strands when I lost my job Strands from the world’s upheavals And strands from the night that we got robbed But each flowing strand of silver hair Helps frame that beautiful face Of the brave and courageous woman Who in my heart always has a place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/13/2011 6:24:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your wife, Joe. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/12/2011 3:34:00 PM
congrats on a shared 2nd place! a sweet tribute to your wife :)
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:18:00 AM
Wonderfully written and impressive poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:40:00 AM
Such a good husband she's one lucky woman! Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2011 9:53:00 PM
This was so lovely, Joe. Congrats in this contest I helped judge with Susan! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:22:00 PM
lovely Joe Congratulations
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Date: 12/11/2011 4:13:00 PM
This is truly beautiful and I am so happy it won top honors Joe. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2011 3:16:00 PM
Brownie points for Joe. She should love this one! Congrats on a well scripted write. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:46:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your wife Joe. Congratulations
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:29:00 PM
Lovely lines for your wife. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/11/2011 1:38:00 PM
Joe congrats on your win, love the way each strand tells a story..David
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:54:00 AM
Just wonderful Joe.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:33:00 AM
Joe-This turned out great...I almost took this angle...but changed my mind. Glad I did 'cuz this would have been very hard to compete with!
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Date: 12/2/2011 3:34:00 PM
aww!! that was really good. it reminds me that love can last forever and never wither.
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