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Silver Strands

The silver strands they hang down low They catch the sun light and it makes them glow. The strands look golden in the sunlight But beautiful, no matter whatever the light. The snow is outside the strands look quite white But silver hanging there, in the pale moonlight. No matter where the strands are The beauty glows even from a far. They are silver they are gold, colours they absorb Wherever they are, they glow like an orb. Today’s the day the silver strands will be gone But the beauty beneath them will not be out shone My mother is having her hair done today The silver strands will soon be coloured away. The colour put through will never disguise The silvery twinkle that moves to her eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/31/2013 1:27:00 PM
Hello SIS, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS (and Mine) Healthy and High in the Spirit.Congratulations on a well deserved WIN. Soup Mail Call I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Brother...Harry
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:55:00 PM
another heartfelt wonderful warm poem, the ending being a classic, which is becoming your trade mark,,,,still have not got to the start as yet of me seeing your poems...
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Date: 12/14/2011 5:08:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, nice use of rhyme, the two end lines close out the poem very well :-)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2011 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte very kind o fyou to comment x
Date: 12/13/2011 6:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mandy. Kim
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2011 1:28:00 AM
Thanks for reading Kim x
Date: 12/13/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/13/2011 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Fab x
Date: 12/12/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Mandy on yor win...very nice poem.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Kash, appreciated x
Date: 12/12/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the Silver Strands contest.- JH
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 12:11:00 PM
Thanks J H appreciated x
Date: 12/12/2011 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Carol x
Date: 12/12/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyes your poem.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Carol. you are very kind x
Date: 12/12/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/12/2011 6:03:00 AM
Thanks Debbie x
Date: 12/11/2011 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mandy. you sure had some pretty images in this one. LUv, Andrea
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2011 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Andrea x
Date: 12/11/2011 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your colorful poem being in the winner's circle. Loved your ending.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2011 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Connie x
Date: 12/11/2011 3:14:00 PM
Great work Mandy. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2011 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Joyce x
Date: 12/11/2011 2:26:00 PM
Mandy congrats on your win, loved it first time around..David
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2011 11:30:00 PM
Thanks David x
Date: 12/11/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mandy
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2011 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Bob x
Date: 12/2/2011 9:35:00 PM
Mandy, good luck in the contest... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/3/2011 6:54:00 AM
Ta muchly x
Date: 12/2/2011 6:47:00 AM
Mandy, this is really quite beautiful. Well done.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/2/2011 7:32:00 AM
Thanks, so is my mother x
Date: 12/2/2011 6:16:00 AM
Mandy well penned, nice flow, good luck in the contest, many thanks for your kind words, and don't forget the gin when you iron ha ha ..David
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:33:00 AM
Got the gin, just gonna hic, hunt, hic for the boarding iron xx

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