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Silver Strands

Tuppy Silver strands silver bands and the rings on her hands, Her hair was the colour of grey, Eyes far away, with the thoughts of her day, As her grandson an audience sought, I was there that day, with an empty head thought, just a boy, but loved this I say. As I looked at her troubled eyes, A Catholic she’d once been married, To a Church of England, man called John, so now she was surely harried, Excommunicated by a priest on that day, So she caught up a rifle, pulled off a few shots, Bounced bullets, as he was running away. The only pleasure to be got, Anyway. With polio born she couldn’t stand, But dragged herself onto a pony, She did eventually walk, But she walked in the path of the lonely.
Susan Burch Contest Name Silver Strands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/1/2011 4:29:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:06:00 AM
Don another great poem, she should have aimed better, good luck mate..David
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Date: 12/1/2011 7:23:00 AM
I agree with Tony, Don....cool write!....oh...I think your Plurry Goose got off lucky! jimbo
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Date: 12/1/2011 4:46:00 AM
Terrific poem. I liked the ending especially. Well done.
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