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Silver Springs

Silver Springs Spring break 2009 Devastation by Hurricane strong winds Totally shocked when Eyes viewed the scene Water still ran clean Wanted to share joy Of the fun zoo With my grandson And you, grand day Day saved Safari Jeep ride Emu Eggs eggs There

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Sue Mason

Date: 8/15/2009 11:23:00 AM

You really like this form and do it very well, Sara! I need to study it more and try one myself ... smile ... there is so much to learn here at the Soup!! Thanks for being here.

Hosea Griffith

Date: 8/14/2009 6:23:00 PM

Nice poem

James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2009 4:21:00 PM

Lovely title Sara, very good write. The title is also a beautiful song by Fleetwood Mac, you'll like it, trust me>>The Highlander>>James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/14/2009 3:13:00 AM

Thanks God, you all survived! We had cyclones and I know pretty well what devastation those bring. At least your day was saved. Good example of a Diminished Hexaverse. Gert. Thanks for your comment on Breathless.