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Silver Scene

~ crystal ICE clinging... arching cherry tree branches stunning silver scene ~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2010 7:51:00 PM

this is a very clear and beautiful image you painted. NIce!! LUv, andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/15/2010 2:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Maggie...last winter was bad but still incredibly beautiful...I love this! Always, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2010 6:50:00 AM

What a splendid picture of a freezing winter day! Good luck, this should do well !! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2010 5:03:00 AM

Very descriptive write in this Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2010 12:39:00 AM

A frozen moment of winter Margaret.Rgds Brian

Date: 5/14/2010 9:39:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. I really like the opening line. Nice use of alliteration in the last line. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Karen

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 8:56:00 PM

Very nice work Margaret~ excellent imagery~ each line so perfect~~~~Rick

Charles Smith

Date: 5/14/2010 8:11:00 PM

thats a really good haiku! im not a big fan of that form, but this one is very beautiful

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 7:55:00 PM

And a lovely scene it is Margaret .. good luck in the new haiku contest .. a wonderful word choice.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 7:46:00 PM

It sounds like a winter wonderland, Margaret! Your lovely "silver scene" makes me long for my youth in New Jersey during the winter. Best wishes to you in the contest. Love, Carolyn