Silver On a Ring

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Devil's Trumpet

Lilium Formosanum

Foxglove/digitalis ..A medicine for heart failure was once made from this plant..

As the dew lies upon the grass Like silver on the ring And the fog coats the green pines After last night's blowing rain A sun rises below the gray Bright shining hides the stars Each plant awaits sun's strong rays Reaching from somewhere afar The trumpet vines' orange flowers Make nectar for birds and bees A waxy columbine attracts Come feed on nectar please All trump blossoms are not so sweet Some produce smelly stink But his charisma draws the crowds A slanted speech in pink The woody honeysuckle blooms A rich aromatic scent Its trumpet flowers draw hummers Nectar abundant present Devil's trumpet dark nectar draws An unusual crowd Those on moral decline hey come Lilium formosanum shroud Foxglove a deadly trumpet plant Small doses gives heart rebirth The show has gone on~on I'd say we got our dollar's worth The political campaign has been an ongoing show Hey we got our one dollar campaign contribution's worth..LOL

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Jonathan J.

Date: 11/9/2021 1:49:00 PM

You are truly gifted! I love your imagery and the metaphor. Your words flow so well and create such a lovely melody. Wonderful write! All the best! ~Jonathan J.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2021 2:39:00 PM

Jonathan, Your visit to my page added a delightful touch. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2016 9:25:00 PM

but also a very nature type poem!!! Interesting how you made it political. I am not even following that crazy circus show.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/15/2016 5:36:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the visit..Nature can be good and bad as our political candidates can be good and bad..A child should be groomed from birth to be the president of the USA being taught what is right but that doesn't happen here does it??? Sara

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/14/2016 8:51:00 AM

As the dew lies upon the grass Like silver on the ring And the fog coats the green pines After last night's blowing rain..LOVELY EXPRESSIONS Ken;)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/15/2016 5:37:00 AM

Thanks for finding some of my lines to be lovely..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Dm Babbit

Date: 7/13/2016 2:15:00 PM

And the trumpets continue to play, in the garden and on the political trail. Interesting write.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by..Your comments were encouraging..I believe that we are getting more than our dollar's worth with this presidential's year campaign..Sara