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Silver Monster

I never used to believe; monsters existed only under the bed or in the nighttime closet until I met one in the color red. Red that first was silver rich I met him by accident but he tasted what lay beneath. Monster wants me permanent. He took things before I had a say he was my skins first kiss, he wants me as his; a monster with sharp silver lips.

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Date: 7/18/2009 5:16:00 PM

Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/17/2009 4:31:00 PM

congrats on being featured.

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/14/2009 2:12:00 PM

Madison, congrats on your feature...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2009 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 3:06:00 PM

Madison, congratulations on being featured thie week. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/13/2009 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on this featured poem. More power and God bless. Ernilando

Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi

Date: 7/13/2009 2:14:00 AM

this is so lovely. I am still trying to crack it though. I would appreciate a clue.

John Rhinem

Date: 6/15/2009 12:04:00 PM

"Hello Again Precious, Priceless & Talented Madison Thomer!!!":):)~I hope that "Your" day is going beautifully for "You" dear young lady!!?:):)~And, I can see the monster within this profoundly written write here....So, how shall we slay it? "You Have Such A Gift of Written Expression, That Weaves Itself So Very Brilliantly!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!":):)~Lets go find another one....