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Silver Lining

No words can blunt the pain of a broken heart Though dulcet melodies may soothe it for a while Much more than tears dost thou impart With time once more to see your golden smile How then can thee revive thy broken dreams Doth sorrow's weight besiege thy soul? Lo, the weight is lighter than it seems With time the silver lining gleams But who can mend a broken soul? What unseen force can repair the inner core He who dwells on high can make you whole Like stars, your light will shine once more And when the silence is broken by thy thoughts Your spirit will rise above the dreams you sought

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/10/2017 9:16:00 AM
This is beautiful and expressive. I love it Joseph :)
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Date: 8/8/2017 9:06:00 PM
Hi Joseph, an emotion, heart touching write. Congrats on your placement:)
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Date: 8/8/2017 6:02:00 PM
I love it! Congrats on your win, Joseph. Janice
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:02:00 AM
Well done, this one resonates with me. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:49:00 PM
Great write and imagery, congrats on the fine win, Joseph
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:18:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet. I like how you wove the precious repair materials into the poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/17/2014 9:14:00 PM
Thank you very much.. I am glad I was up to the challenge..Thank you for the placement
Date: 1/13/2014 12:44:00 PM
An honest and truely beautiful write full of faith and hope. thank you for sharing my fellow souper. cheri
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:54:00 PM
Interesting old English sonnet. Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:44:00 PM
Silver lining.. Truly inspirational!! Great write...My best, chuck
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Date: 1/9/2014 2:47:00 AM
I will favor this gem, Joseph...Absolutely soul touching; consoling! Thanks for sharing this and thanks for the visit. All the best for 2014. Love, Annalise
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Joseph May
Date: 1/9/2014 8:23:00 AM
thank you Annalise..I appreciate that...best wishes for 2014
Date: 1/9/2014 12:48:00 AM
I love the hopeful, upward rise of this poem. Good job.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/9/2014 8:21:00 AM
thank you Mark
Date: 1/8/2014 7:25:00 PM
I like how you mixed the diamonds into this one, and ending on a positive note! reminded me of the Bee Gees song.
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:49:00 PM
A well written poem Joseph, You are the best when you write with so much passion.......Roger
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Joseph May
Date: 1/9/2014 8:20:00 AM
thank you Roger
Date: 1/8/2014 1:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and ceative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page to say congrats...Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 1/9/2014 8:20:00 AM
thank you Sara

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