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silver haiku

frost carpets the lawn
on the doormat, a snail leaves
a gift of silver

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  1. Date: 1/23/2011 5:41:00 PM
    A delightful image -- seing the frost as a gift of silver. Beautiful haiku, Eiken! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
    Very nice write! Christine :))

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:03:00 PM
    A beautiful write! I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:55:00 AM
    A perfect Haiku dear poet ! Visual memories of summer mornings, I love it !much love, james

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:45:00 PM
    BEautiful imagery, Eieken. just beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 12:14:00 PM
    Nice one Eiken comparing the trail of the snail to silver....:)

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 11:49:00 AM
    Nice job with your haiku, Eiken. If this is for the contest, good luck. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 8:23:00 AM
    Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Eiken. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:41:00 AM
    Very keen sense of observation you have penned so well with great images, Eiken

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:57:00 AM
    This is lovely, nicely written, good luck

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:33:00 AM
    Very well written Eiken .. nice imagery full of vibrant tones.. good luck in the contest my friend..with luv..