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Silly Goose

Sometimes, the pernicious is just desserts like alveoli losing pink to a ciggy devil Love - an enterprise astral yields to blemish: mockery Garish sentry sneers, reflecting on a visage muting its boo-hoo on a traverse still willed in woo Silly teeter-totters with serious editing tears that dampen a life… (10/31/2020: Gibson HB, DMS)

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Date: 11/3/2020 2:02:00 AM
passively acidic comment below...I read it quite differently. Of course, tears can be read and understood two ways. I will wait to make a full comment on this one. Stellar word-play though. :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 11/3/2020 6:20:00 AM
thank goodness most acids remain passive lol .. I shall await the full commentary...thank you :)
Date: 11/1/2020 4:37:00 AM
Now this one seems to have a deep meaning to it.. I guess some people get what is coming to them...
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 11/1/2020 6:52:00 AM
one just keeps trying to maintain a balance :)

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