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Out walking on the beach alone, Waves breaking with a somber tone. I was only a stumble From cracking up and crashing down. Old driftwood and a weathered shell; Lone inmate in a private hell. I'd been telling myself I should take my business out of town. Bad karma plucked a sour string. No music, just the same damn thing. I'd been singin’ the blues With a heavy feeling in my gut. Faith, charity, but not much hope; All tangled in the hangin’ rope. You can't open a window If someone's gone and nailed it shut. Just then she came and took my hand, Said, "Got a minute, sailor man." Her assertive approach Caught me unprepared and way off guard. She rattled me with sunset eyes, Full frontal, wearing no disguise, Her horizon aflame With a sexy charm that hit me hard. She teased me with her silhouette. I smiled and said, "I'll see your bet." It was getting on dark, So I took the hint and got undressed. I'm sure we musta broke some law. No telling what the seagulls saw. If they’d called the police We'd be lucky to avoid arrest. Some risks aren't really worth the chance. Sometimes it doesn't pay to dance, But the answer that night Was to call her on a double dare. I'll gamble, though I never bluff. She's coy, but then I dig that stuff. It's enough to get lucky When you wager on a winning pair.

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Date: 12/18/2021 9:19:00 AM
What sweet memory you have stirred.
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Date: 12/17/2021 1:57:00 PM
I was sure this was my life's story until the sunset eyed vixen entered the scene. Good going "sailor man!"
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Date: 9/14/2021 12:44:00 PM
Back with congratulations for a well deserved POTD, Michael!
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Date: 9/12/2021 10:02:00 PM
Good to meet you thru this moving poem, pulled me right into the scene from the shells to the chance you sex.she could have been me 41 years ago before my devout marriage, when I was a hippie :) yr an incredible scene-setter & I loved the sunset comparison descriptions to her, & the plays with gambling references..
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/13/2021 4:21:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Michael :)
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:36:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2021 10:32:00 AM
Michael, wonderful writing and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:36:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. No "singin’ the blues" on this wonderful/fun write. Have a blessed day.......................
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:36:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 10:04:00 AM
There is so much I loved about this poem; the direct confessions, the sly double entendres and the faith hope and charty reference that I imagine was missed by some. I too had a similar inspiration (Beach Child). Congracts on the POTD.
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:36:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 9:53:00 AM
*A teasing silhouette and sexy charm* Oh my ! It sounds like she had you under her spell. This is beautiful, romantic and playful- passionate and sensual too. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Michael, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:36:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 9:30:00 AM
Michael, I knew that very soon your poetry would be recognized. It is marvelous and I enjoy it so much. Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on P.O.T.D.! I'm hoping this honor will introduce you to many more readers.
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:37:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2021 8:21:00 AM
That was some silhouette Michael, a wonderful lyric poem, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 2:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 7:46:00 AM
Very engrossing story! I enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:07:00 AM
Cool poem, Michael. Kudos on POTD! Love and more love always.
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 7:46:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/12/2021 4:12:00 AM
Great story kept me engrossed till end. Amazing talent. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and day
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 4:53:00 AM
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Date: 9/12/2021 1:27:00 AM
Enjoyed your smooth flowing lyric Michael, congratulations on POTD. Tom
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/12/2021 4:53:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2021 6:17:00 PM
Another riveting piece of writing. I love the way you wrap a story in rhyme and keep it flowing through your stanzas. Great work, Michael.
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/10/2021 6:25:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/10/2021 3:22:00 PM
Mesmerizing write, Michael! Yeah, this one's a keeper. Faved.
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/10/2021 3:54:00 PM
Many thanks.
Date: 9/10/2021 1:16:00 PM
Very nice I especially like the ending line :)
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 9/10/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you.

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