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Silently She Weeps

Every day she comes to visit her, lifts the spoon to her thin lips. Quietly she sleeps, silently she weeps. Life arrested in its waning grip. Every day she comes with hope that something in her changes. Silently she weeps, quietly she sleeps The memories time rearranges. Every day she comes and wonders, will she wake today and speak? Quietly she sleeps, silently she weeps An imprisoned mind in body weak. Every day she comes and touches the woman like no other. Silently she weeps, quietly she sleeps. Maternal daughter, loving mother. 1/1/2013

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Date: 12/20/2013 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful and touching and simply wonderful piece.... All the best... Ellie
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James Nichols
Date: 12/24/2013 4:29:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 1/15/2013 9:05:00 AM
James, , :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD
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James Nichols
Date: 1/16/2013 4:38:00 PM
thanks so much!
Date: 1/13/2013 1:19:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your top win..Sara
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James Nichols
Date: 1/16/2013 4:38:00 PM
appreciate it!
Date: 1/12/2013 6:43:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 7:08:00 PM
thanks, Debbie!
Date: 1/12/2013 5:48:00 PM
James this is just wonderful close to your heart thats obvious......Seren
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 7:08:00 PM
thanks so much, it is.
Date: 1/12/2013 5:38:00 PM
A sad and beautiful piece of work, James...well deserving of 1st place in Su's contest - Tim
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Tim!
Date: 1/12/2013 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, James! So well deserved! Always, Annalise
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 7:08:00 PM
thank you very much!
Date: 1/12/2013 12:39:00 PM
WOW. This is heartbreaking and beautifully written. Congratulations on an amazing win! I'm faving this one.
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Heather. From such a talent yourself that's mighty high praise!
Date: 1/12/2013 11:41:00 AM
A tender and sad poem. congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
thank you very much.
Date: 1/12/2013 11:32:00 AM
James, a very loving win. congrats , very nice~SKAT
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 1:31:00 PM
thank you very much!
Date: 1/12/2013 10:22:00 AM
Relating so much to these tender verses...memories flood. You have written such a touching poem on the subject of the bond between mother and daughter during trying times. Small tears flood my eyes....this is just wonderfully written.
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 11:11:00 AM
Thank you. It's humbling to evoke emotion with the written word.
Date: 1/12/2013 9:43:00 AM
This is very touching and masterfully written. Congratulations.
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/12/2013 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on you winning spot James xx
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James Nichols
Date: 1/12/2013 8:48:00 AM
thank you so much.

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