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As darkness hides, the morning peeps her cautious face through starry veils let down; an inch by inch it creeps. As darkness hides, the morning peeps down to the earth, who gently sleeps while nighttime flees. The morn prevails as darkness hides; the morning peeps her cautious face through starry veils.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/17/2019 5:10:00 PM
This is lovely!
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:32:00 PM
Beautiful wording on this, Isaiah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:24:00 PM
Very lovely, Isaiah. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:23:00 PM
this is stunning Isaiah, I wish I could write a triolet like this. Congrats on the win. SKAT
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Date: 6/13/2015 7:08:00 AM
Isaiah this triolet lulled me into a quiet rhythmic cadence as it read so smoothly. Excellent weaving of the triolet threads.
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:30:00 AM
This was so stunning Isaiah - dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:40:00 AM
Perfect in every way, and you got your enjambment going on too!! That always makes me happy to see poets writing that way. Congrats for a top win, Isaiah. Your picking that particular picture says a lot about who you are!
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Date: 5/27/2015 9:45:00 AM
lustrous write, Isaiah...i think of aurora and just sigh!.. greeat write!.. huggs
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Date: 5/25/2015 8:02:00 PM
beautiful imagery, enjoyed your write .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
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Date: 5/25/2015 4:48:00 PM
Isaiah, this is outstanding, a beautiful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings
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Date: 5/25/2015 1:50:00 PM
Beautifully written triolet, Isaiah! I really enjoyed the imagery in this, and it describes the scene well. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/25/2015 12:32:00 PM
simply stunning Isaiah - this is the first one I have read for this particular visual:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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