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Silent Suffering

'In the darkness may glimpses of light be shone upon me, giving me the strength i need to walk thru the shadows of whispering trees and untamed wild beasts to mend what secretly is.....a silent but ever aching heart

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2020 9:33:00 AM

passion here! thick; like the dense where moss and mushroomz flourish...smiling here...*winks, jamez

Julie Clark

Date: 1/30/2016 7:21:00 AM

interesting but good pictures

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/25/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Julie. I appreciate your feedback as have read and love many of your poems. H

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/23/2015 12:39:00 PM

WOW Mockingbird! You won me this well written piece of your soul. A powerful write with images that I can relate too very much. A lovely and powerful write my dear Mockingbird. Love, The Blue Poet xoxo

Ayesha Karim

Date: 12/7/2015 8:56:00 AM

You captured so many powerful images in this short three line poem. I suffer from a mental illness and have suffered for twenty years now. Thank you for this poem!

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/13/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thankyou for reading. I wrote this during a very difficult time of my life to which I have now overcome. With strength, honesty and love for ones self we can overcome anything. Remember you too hold all these tools and can overcome anything. best wishes

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/5/2015 10:28:00 PM

Very poignant poem, nice!

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/13/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thankyou Arthur

Julie Clark

Date: 12/2/2015 11:53:00 AM

very good and thought provoking yes psalms positive thoughts shining through the darkness

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thankyou Julie!

John Fleming

Date: 12/2/2015 6:20:00 AM

You certainly have a most intriguing name...Its rather quite lovely! Your poem reminded me somewhat of the psalm: "My lord is my shepherd". There is a certain sense of "Fortitude" about your poem. Keep on writing...And welcome to the "Soup"! My best regards! :) john

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 5:21:00 PM

Interesting comment John - The lord is my shepherd was a popular hymn at the school I attended 20+ years ago. A favourite church psalm as well. I had not seen the link until reading your comment. Thankyou for your words. H

Francis Osho

Date: 12/2/2015 1:18:00 AM

nice stevenson

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 1:41:00 AM

Thanks Francis!