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Silent Struggles

In silence, I scream, unheard cries, Lost in a world of shallow lies. "It's not a big deal," they casually say, While I'm drowning, night and day. Each piece of me, I'm giving away, Yet they don't see the price I pay. "I'll get through it," they gently coo, But the battle within, only I knew. A prisoner of my own mind, I fight, Yearning for freedom, for the light. I'm dying inside, my spirit cries, Yet, somehow, hope never dies. In the depths of despair, a flickering flame, A whisper of strength, a familiar name. I hold on tight to that glimmering thread, Believing one day, I'll mend what's shred. For even in darkness, there's a ray, A chance for a brighter, happier day. I cling to hope, despite the pain, Hoping that someday, I'll break the chain.

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Date: 11/18/2023 1:12:00 AM
So many emotions poured out. Glad to have visited your page
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/18/2023 3:28:00 AM
I'm happy you liked my poems Karen! Thanks!
Date: 10/31/2023 2:40:00 AM
Ariana, I agree with Mark, your writing IS worthy of praise. The meter and flow of your poetry make it a joy to read. Don’t doubt yourself my young friend. Write on. John
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/31/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thanks John for your comment. I'm so glad you liked my poem, I'm trying my best. I'm not that good yet, but I will learn! Thanks for your support and your kind words :-)
Date: 10/30/2023 8:07:00 AM
Ariana, you are worthy of praise, and at such a young age, your talents for writing shine brightly!
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Mark Hughes
Date: 10/30/2023 8:43:00 AM
You are doing great!! Continued success with writing.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/30/2023 8:09:00 AM
Oh Mark, your words are so sweet. I'm just trying my very best, but I'm not worthy of such high praise. I'm still learning! But I really appreciate you, your comments encourage me to keep going.

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